You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
map indicates a city
named Brandfield which is going to have some changes in the future.
First of all, it is clearly evident that the golf course and park occupy the majority of the map. There
are located Correct pronoun usage
They
at
the western Change preposition
in
part
. Beside
that, in the central Replace the word
Besides
part
of the city
, we observe city
centre which is quite large. Correct article usage
the city
Moreover
, in the northern region of Add an article
the city
city
there are housing states for Add a comma
city,
residence
. Replace the word
residents
In addition
to a small state for industrial activities in the western part
.
It is crystal clear that there is a river which begin
from the north to the south-western area. Change the verb form
begins
Further
, a curve
shape road Replace the word
curved
is passing
the Wrong verb form
passes
city
from north to south, and finally
, a limited railway is acrossing
from the north-western region to the south-eastern area. What's more, urban planners are going to Correct your spelling
crossing
a crossing
across
built
a new bazaar in two parts which are in the Change the verb
build
norhtern
Correct your spelling
northern
part
next to the houses and the south-western zone besides
Replace the word
beside
railway
.
In sum, despite some changes that are going to happen in the northern and southern parts of the Correct article usage
the railway
city
, other places are going to stay unchange
.Correct your spelling
unchanged
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, part with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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