The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the figures for
families
in various stages of income in the United States in three separate years.
Overall
, the households who earn $50000 - $74999 per year and $75000 - $99999 per year were far less than the number of the other kinds of
families
while
the figure for
families
earning less than $25000 was consistently lower than that for
families
earning between $25000 and $49999 and they remained a slight gap over the 8-year period.
Firstly
, the lowest numbers of
families
(earned $75000-$99999) got a slight decline from 14
million
in 2007 to 13
million
in 2011, and grew to reach 15
million
over the next 4 years.
However
, the second lowest income stage of
families
(earned $50000- $74999) remained stable at around 21
million
between 2007 and 2015. The two types of households that earned less than $49999 had seen a similar trend during the 8-year period.
Families
earned less than $25000 grew to reach from just over 25
million
in 2007 to 28
million
in 2011
while
another type of household increased from 26
million
to just under 30
million
at the same time, followed by a slight decline( 1
million
for both) by 2015.
In addition
, the figure for those homes who gain a salary of more than 100000 per year was consistently just less than 30
million
,
however
, it peaked at 33
million
by 2015 which was the largest group of total
families
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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