The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates some data about the subway systems in six disparate
cities
around the world.
It is clearly evident that London
is the oldest city which established the underground railway system in 1863. Other metropolices
found Correct your spelling
metropolises
this
phenomenon between 1900 and 1981. Unlike Los Angeles which is the latest one and started to begins
in 2001. Change the verb
begin
Moreover
, the other significant factor we should consider is the kilometres
of route. It is obvious that London
has by far the widest railways which is 394 kilometres
. After London
, Paris, Tokyo, and Washington Dc
Correct your spelling
DC
has
the broadest distance with about 160 Correct subject-verb agreement
have
kilometres
averagely
. Change the word
average
Finally
, LA,
and Kyoto manufactured the shortest length of route with merely 28 and 11 Remove the comma
apply
kilometres
, respectively.
Further
, another pivotal factor is how many passengaers
those trains carry annually. It is crystal clear that Tokyo, in spite of Correct your spelling
passengers
it's
small length, could carry more Replace the word
its
that
other Correct word choice
than
cities
with 1927 travellers. What's more, Paris and London
with a little difference are in the next positions. In addition
to
Washington, LA, and Kyoto Change preposition
apply
that has
the least fortune in comparison to other Wrong verb form
have
cities
.
In sum, London
's subway opened more
earlier than other Change the word
apply
cities
and passes a longer destination. Meanwhile, Tokyo has more voyagers. On the contrary
, Kyoto and Los Angeles were built earlier and pass
Wrong verb form
passed
shortest
way, Change the article
the shortest
in addition
to have
fewer Wrong verb form
having
number of
people who are using their new urban systems.Correct quantifier usage
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, london, kilometres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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