In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In a certain amount of nations, there is a small portion of the population which receives an exorbitant income compared to the rest of the

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is beneficial to the country, or if the government should take action over

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matter and limitate how much money people are able to receive.

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an uneven distribution of wealth provides

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upward class mobility, it

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carries inequality and poverty.

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, my personal opinion is that its drawbacks outweigh its benefits and that

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action should be taken by the authorities. On the one hand, the presence of a reduced group of

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with a higher income indicates the existence of a rewarding society. It is claimed that, if some individuals gain more money than others, is

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their abilities.

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of their efforts and skills, they acquire better jobs and even greater salaries, accessing more power and status.

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, skilled employees can ascend the latter in their companies, reaching management and CEO positions.

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, uneven distribution of wealth imposes dire needs on families. The truth is that some

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are born in poorer households, which hinders their possibilities of accessing education, health and even more primordial needs

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as food. What is more,

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prevents them from expanding their potential.

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, their chances of obtaining a great quality of life are limited.

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is the case for many

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of developing countries, namely Pakistan, whose country does not fulfil their needs

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better opportunities, driving them to pursue better ones in more advanced countries in Europe and North America.

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, income inequality compensates capable individuals.

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, it has restricted some

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to overcome poverty, hunger and poor health.

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these reasons, I believe some governments should regulate how much a person earns

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so that everyone can access a good quality of life.