In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In a certain amount of nations, there is a small portion of the population which receives an exorbitant income compared to the rest of the

citizens

. There is some dispute

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this

is beneficial to the country, or if the government should take action over

this

matter and limitate how much money people are able to receive.

Although

an uneven distribution of wealth provides

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upward class mobility, it

also

carries inequality and poverty.

Therefore

, my personal opinion is that its drawbacks outweigh its benefits and that

further

action should be taken by the authorities. On the one hand, the presence of a reduced group of

citizens

with a higher income indicates the existence of a rewarding society. It is claimed that, if some individuals gain more money than others, is

due to

their abilities.

As a result

of their efforts and skills, they acquire better jobs and even greater salaries, accessing more power and status.

For instance

, skilled employees can ascend the latter in their companies, reaching management and CEO positions.

On the other hand

, uneven distribution of wealth imposes dire needs on families. The truth is that some

citizens

are born in poorer households, which hinders their possibilities of accessing education, health and even more primordial needs

such

as food. What is more,

this

prevents them from expanding their potential.

Thus

, their chances of obtaining a great quality of life are limited.

This

is the case for many

citizens

of developing countries, namely Pakistan, whose country does not fulfil their needs

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better opportunities, driving them to pursue better ones in more advanced countries in Europe and North America.

To conclude

, income inequality compensates capable individuals.

However

, it has restricted some

citizens

to overcome poverty, hunger and poor health.

Due to

these reasons, I believe some governments should regulate how much a person earns

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so that everyone can access a good quality of life.