The diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather goods

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The given diagram gives information about the steps and equipment involved in the production of the making

leather

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goods.

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, there are 5 main steps in the process. Beginning with taking animal

skin

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and drying it and ending with completing the creation of a and bringing it to the place of sale.

Firstly

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, the

leather

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was taken from the

skin

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of wild animals after it dried and it was transferred to the factory.

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, after it was desiccated, the

skin

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was dipped in lime water to wash,

this

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stage was done and it was soaked in lime later. At the next stride, it will be fattened to become a

leather

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. Before

this

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was polished, it would be saturated in a mixture of water and vegetable matter, called tannin. Afterwards,

this

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will be moved to a place of work to make products

such

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as shoes,

skin

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bags and

leather

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jackets. It will be brought to users for consumption

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Vocabulary: Replace the words leather, skin with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

157 words

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The diagram shows the stages involved in the process of making leather goods

Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching T.V . However, TV cannot replace the book as a learning tool,which is why children are less well educated today,to what extent do you agree with this statement ?

Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors. I strongly believe that the pros far outweigh the cons, and will examine both below.