The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.

The line graph gives information about how much

fruit

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was produced in four large countries , namely ,

Spain

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, Turkey , France and Germany, ranging from 1970 to 2010. Units are

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.

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, it can be noticed from the flow chart that

Spain

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had the greatest amount of food

production

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, among other countries, in four given decades. As for the other three nations , they tried to overtake each other over time. Focusing on the year

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1970 , the biggest amount of the

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belonged to

Spain

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( over 5

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tonnes

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). France had the lowest total which was above 1 000 000 000 kilograms. When it comes to the

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of Turkey and Germany , they

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both produced nearly 2 and 2.5

millions

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of

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respectively. Examining the final decade, there

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a slight decrease in the percentage of producing of

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in

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and stood at almost 5

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tonnes

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. Looking at the

production

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of Turkey , we can see that it has increased gradually over time and reached to little under 4

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tonnes

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of

fruit

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.

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,

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there was a gradual increase in the amount of producing

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in France , the proportion of the

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of

fruit

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had

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decreased little by little and showed over 1

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tonnes

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.