The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.
The line graph gives information about how much
fruit
was produced in four large countries , namely , Spain
, Turkey , France and Germany, ranging from 1970 to 2010. Units are showed
in Wrong verb form
shown
tonnes
.
Overall
, it can be noticed from the flow chart that Spain
had the greatest amount of food production
, among other countries, in four given decades. As for the other three nations , they tried to overtake each other over time.
Focusing on the year of
1970 , the biggest amount of the Change preposition
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production
belonged to Spain
( over 5 million
tonnes
). France had the lowest total which was above 1 000 000 000 kilograms. When it comes to the production
of Turkey and Germany , they had
both produced nearly 2 and 2.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
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million
of
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tonnes
of fruit
respectively.
Examining the final decade, there had been
a slight decrease in the percentage of producing of Wrong verb form
was
fruit
in Spain
and stood at almost 5 million
tonnes
. Looking at the production
of Turkey , we can see that it has increased gradually over time and reached to little under 4 million
tonnes
of fruit
. Furthermore
, Although
there was a gradual increase in the amount of producing fruit
in France , the proportion of the production
of fruit
had
decreased little by little and showed over 1 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
tonnes
.Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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