The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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These are diagrams of a wave-
energy
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machine, its various parts,its working principle and possible options for its location.
Overall
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, the machine is made of four parts that enable the generation of
energy
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through water waves and
air flow
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airflow
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in specific directions.
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, there are two possible locations where
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machinery can be placed that will determine the
energy
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output to be generated. In a body of water, the wave moves in the western direction and air is allowed to flow from the top and the bottom in the three chambers, accelerated by the turbines in the first and second
chamber
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. To the side of the machine, there is a generator which can convert
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wave
energy
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into electrical
energy
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. The location options are influenced by the cost, for the first site which is on the left side inside a body of water, it will incur high installation costs but it will
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use large waves that will yield high electricity output.
While
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for
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apply
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the second
it
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will be on the right side, not so much will be spent on installing it but it will only use small waves to generate less electricity.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 5 times.
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