the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.
The pie charts provide information on the populations of Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 grouped into three age classes and predictions 5 decades later.
Overall
, in both Linking Words
countries
those within the range of 15-59 will account for a large proportion of the Add a comma
countries,
population
in 2050.
In the year 2000 in Yemen, of the total Use synonyms
population
, slightly above half of the people (50.1%) were younger than fifteen, 46.3% were below 60 Use synonyms
while
only 3.6% were well above 60. In 2050, there will be a different trend Linking Words
of
most of the people in the 15-59 age bracket (57.3%) Change preposition
for
due to
the proposed drop in the percentage of citizens who fall in the bracket 0-14. As for the older Linking Words
population
, they will only account for 5.7% of the Use synonyms
population
.
Most of the Italians in 2000 were 15-59 years and Use synonyms
this
will not change as Linking Words
this
age class will account for 46.2% of the Linking Words
population
5 decades later. Use synonyms
While
there was a drop in Linking Words
this
bracket, the teenagers aged fourteen will grow in amount Linking Words
make
up 42.3% of the total number years later.Wrong verb form
making
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