The maps below provide the variations which have occured at Queen Mary since its construction in 1960.
These are maps showing the Queen Mary Hospital in 1960, 1980, and 2000 and the developments that have occurred.
Overall
, noticeable features were the addition of a Linking Words
centre
which enlarged over the next two decades, the introduction of additional sites Use synonyms
as well
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as
the enlargement of the hospital.
In 1960, just to the left of the facility, a shopping complex was constructed and below it Correct word choice
and
were
the farming area and the Car Park. There was a major road which served the Queen Mary building at the very top.
In the successive twenty years, the hospital was expanded to house a pharmacy for the sale of drugs and what was usually a shopping Change the verb form
was
centre
became a Use synonyms
centre
for Use synonyms
all-things
Oncology. The Farmland was modified into a school of nursing and maintained the position just next to the Car Park.
By 2000, the Cancer Correct your spelling
all things
Centre
was Use synonyms
further
expanded occupying almost half of the space and some of the area mapped out for the nursing school, moving the school Linking Words
further
to the right.Linking Words
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