Se should fix the traffic and transportation by making everyone lives in the cities not suburbs or countrysides. What to extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that transportation problems can
be solve
by shifting the Change the verb form
be solved
people
to Use synonyms
city
from all Use synonyms
side
of cities.Fix the agreement mistake
sides
This
essay totally Linking Words
agree
with Change the verb form
agrees
statement
because countryside Add an article
the statement
people
get help easily and decrease environmental issue .
Gathering of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
metropolitan
area Add an article
the metropolitan
help
Change the verb form
helps
people
in travelling as in cities they can get help from other Use synonyms
people
and Use synonyms
also
there is Linking Words
a
public transport availability which is accessible to everyone Correct article usage
apply
for example
in moving cities a person Linking Words
don't
have to struggle a lot to get Correct subject-verb agreement
doesn't
bus
Add an article
the bus
a bus
in contrast
to the Linking Words
people
of Use synonyms
rular
area where Correct your spelling
ruler
people
serve there half time in journey and don't get enough time for family and leisure activities .Use synonyms
Thus
Linking Words
city
life Use synonyms
help
Change the verb form
helps
public
Correct article usage
the public
for moving
here and there .
On the Change preposition
to move
hand
Correct word choice
other hand
.
Correct your spelling
while
while
living in Linking Words
area
near Add an article
the area
an area
job
Correct your spelling
a workplace
place
Add a comma
place,
people
mostly prefer to walk around the Use synonyms
city
to reach Use synonyms
the
duty which ultimately reduce the number of vehicle and accident which is good for health and Change the word
their
environment
.Correct article usage
the environment
As the
smoke coming from the vehicles Change preposition
The
cause
air pollution and Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
lead
to Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
the
air disease and respiratory allergies .Correct article usage
apply
For
Linking Words
example
in Add a comma
example,
Malaysia
they shift the worker Add a comma
Malaysia,
into
Change preposition
to
near by
place and they all travel by bicycle which reduce Correct your spelling
nearby
in
Change preposition
apply
the
cardiac issues .
In conclusion,increasing population in Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
city
may cause bad effects but Add an article
the city
a city
it's
Replace the word
its
benifts
come with more happiness and growth Correct your spelling
benefits
.country
can cope Correct your spelling
country
up
with Change preposition
apply
transport
Correct article usage
the transport
issue
by shifting regular travellers to nearby their destinations .Fix the agreement mistake
issues
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