The first graph displays which electrical appliances are owned the most of a household, while, the others illustrates how many hours of housework were consumed per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The first graph displays which electrical appliances are owned the most of a household, while, the others illustrates how many hours of housework were consumed per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
The first graph displays which electrical appliances are owned the most
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a household,
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, the others
illustrates
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how many hours of housework were consumed per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "displays" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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