The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed
The table depicts the police’s
budget
sources from three distinct origins, Use synonyms
while
the pie charts give information about the distribution of the money spent for three different reasons in a town in the UK between 2017 and 2018.
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Overall
, the biggest income for the police department was from the national government and there were increasing numbers regarding the allocated funds during both years. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the UK police agency allocated the greatest amount of its Linking Words
budget
for payment purposes.
To commence, the national government distributed nearly 50% of the UK Use synonyms
budget
for both years, Use synonyms
with
adding 2 million to its income source in 2018. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, local taxes contributed fairly 30% of its Linking Words
budget
income, starting from 91.2 m to 102.3 m during the timeframe. Use synonyms
Although
other sources were the least contributor to the UK’s Linking Words
budget
, they still rose by 0.5m in 2018.
For the expenditure, salaries for officers and staff were the highest amongst the others, accounting for 75% in 2017. Use synonyms
However
, the proportion fell by 6% in 2018. Linking Words
While
buildings and transport accounted for the second largest police expenditure, the figure remained the same for both years. The Linking Words
last
police’s expenses, technology, began by nearly a tenth in 2017 and rose by 6% during a year.Linking Words
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