The map below shows the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

The map below shows the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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The two maps give information about how people get to a city hospital in two years, 2017 and 2010.
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, the
road
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has undergone changes,
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as an expanded car park and a special place for buses. In 2007, there were several bus stops on two sides of Hospital Street,but, in 2010 these small bus stops were removed and there was constructed bigger special place for public transport on the left side of the
road
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.
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, the old
road
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access had one place for parking for staff and the public, later there built different parking for each of them.Car parking for patients was built on the east side of the city hospital and the old car park was converted into parking for employers. Another striking change was the construction of the roundabout, which can be found in the front of the city hospital.The one thing that remained the same
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Ring
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road
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Road
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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