Writing task 1: Write atleast 150 words and spend no more than 20 minutes on this task. You are new to the city and you would like to take your family out for a meal. Write a letter to your friend who is familiar with the city. In your letter: • Tell him or her about the occasion • Tell him or her about what kind of a restaurant you prefer • Ask him suitable recommendations Start with Dear..............,

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Dear Tony, I hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and well. I am writing
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letter to get suggestions about a suitable
restaurant
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in
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city
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as I have planned to go out for a meal with my family members. First and foremost, I wanted to let you know about the occasion which I
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planned
few
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days back. As you know, recently I have moved to
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new
city
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permanently from Bangladesh. As a part of celebrating
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achievement, I have decided to
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a dinner party in a
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so that me and my family members can cope
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with the new culture of
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new
city
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. Since you have been staying in
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city
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for a long time, I firmly believe that you have a good idea about the good
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restaurant
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around
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city
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. As people from the subcontinent, we
prefered
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preferred
those restaurants
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provides
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Bangali
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Bengali
food items, especially rice, fish,
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apply
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smashed potato etc. It seems to me that you are the right person to suggest
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a
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where
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continental
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foods are available
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the
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environment is
family friendly
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.
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, you are
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cordially invited
in
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this
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dinner party. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding
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matter. Yours lovingly, Faisal
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a single clear idea. The second paragraph is slightly unfocused, with both the occasion and a brief introduction to the move being mentioned.
coherence cohesion
Make certain the introduction is concise and directly addresses the purpose of the letter.
task achievement
Aim for a more precise articulation of the request in the body of the letter. The third paragraph could be clearer and more direct regarding the restaurant preferences.
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Utilize a consistent formal style. The closing phrase 'Yours lovingly' is more suited for intimate correspondence, whereas 'Yours sincerely' or 'Best regards' would be more appropriate in this context.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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