Disposing of waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days. What are the cause and solutions of this issue?

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has become a common
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nowadays.
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Waste
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management
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on the
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has become
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issue
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nowadays.
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tend to mess on the
streets
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resulting in physical and mental health
problems
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. In
order
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to minimise
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trends, social
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and initiative towards
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management
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by throwing light on public by the policy maker. Since the olden days,
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environment
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considered
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one of the prime
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of one’s
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. Without
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, there will be a
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in society.
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, a messy street
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full of
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,
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this
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will
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hamper our mental status. When we see
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surroundings
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spread, the feeling of uneasiness occurs which is not healthy.
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by
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the emergence
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of certain growth of micro-organisms within the area.
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will eventually consumed via unhealthy practices like improper handwashing which lead to the
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of diseases in the
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.
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the severity of the
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might increase with the disease
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.  In
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to curb
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the consequences, certain measures need to be taken to solve the
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.
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, strong
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policyholders
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need to
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address
the
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and bring it to the light of
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community
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the community
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of an individual and
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community
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the community
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as a whole to
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manage
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their own
waste
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. Having said that, there should
have
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proper disposal
areas
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has
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to
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authority
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so that the
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who
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utilising the facilities should do
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, the media
people
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, like journalists have to cover the
areas
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to create
awareness
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.
This
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action will not only reduce
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waste
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management
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problems
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but
also
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helps
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to create
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on
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of
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hazards.  
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my
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, I would reiterate that,
waste
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management
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is possible and need to
adress
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address
the
issue
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to bring
possible
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a possible
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solution. It is always possible.
streets
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resulting in physical and mental health
problems
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. In
order
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to minimise
such
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trends , social
awareness
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and initiative towards
waste
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management
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should be given to the public by the policy maker. Since the olden days, a clean environment has been considered one of the prime components of one’s well-being. Without
this
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, there will be a
problem
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in society.
For instance
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, a messy street full of
waste
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,
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apply
show examples
will
initially
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hamper our mental status. When we see
such
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surrounding
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surroundings
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with lots of litter spread, the feeling of uneasiness occurs which is not healthy.
Similarly
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, it
destroy
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destroys
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human physical health by the emergence of certain growth of micro-organisms within the area.
This
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will eventually be consumed via unhealthy practices like improper handwashing which lead to the
outbreak
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of diseases in the
community
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.
Then
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the severity of the
problem
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might increase with the disease
outbreak
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. In
order
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to curb the dare consequences, certain measures need to be taken to solve the
issue
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.
Firstly
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, strong policyholders need to address the
issue
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and bring it to the light of the
community
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.
This
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is the responsibility of an individual and the
community
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as a whole to manage their own
waste
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. Having said that, there should be proper disposal
areas
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.
This
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has to be addressed by designated
authority
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authorities
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,
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apply
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so that the ones who are utilising the facilities should do
accordingly
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.
In addition
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, the media
people
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, like journalists have to cover the
areas
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to create
awareness
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.
This
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action will not only reduce the
waste
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management
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problems
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but
also
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help to create
awareness
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of the
heath
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health
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hazards.
To conclude
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my writing, I would reiterate that,
waste
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management
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is possible and need to address the
issue
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to bring a possible solution. It is always possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inadequate provision
  • waste bins
  • public areas
  • accumulation
  • public awareness
  • environmental and health implications
  • strict regulations
  • penalties
  • littering
  • infrastructure
  • regular waste collection
  • public education campaigns
  • responsible waste management
  • implementing stricter penalties
  • community service
  • adherence
  • compliance
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