The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the monthly
price
changes of three kinds of metals over 12 months in 2014.
Overall
,
nickel
's
price
had a significant fluctuation during the year
while
the
price
of copper and
zinc
remained smaller changes over the year. Before June, all types of metals' prices had seen a downward trend, though the change in the
price
of
zinc
witnessed a significant increase (from 1% to 3%) between January and February. The figure for the
price
changes of three metals all reached the lowest point (
nickel
was at -3%,
zinc
was at -1% and copper was at -0.5% respectively). By the following month, the percentage of metal prices all had seen an increase compared to the previous month -
nickel
went up to -1% ,
zinc
-0.5% and 1% respectively, with stable remaining at
this
figure for 2 months, and all have seen a slight decline the next month.
Although
nickel
had the highest increase in
price
in January which was far higher than the others, the gap between them narrowed over the 12 months.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, nickel, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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