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Nowadays,learning a foreign language is essential in the modern education system. While others think it is not beneficial to teach young children a foreign language as the benefits of it are uncertain. Some people strongly believe that it has more advantages than the disadvantages.

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Nowadays,learning a foreign
language
 is essential in the modern education system.
While
 others think it is not beneficial to teach young
children
 a foreign
language
 as the benefits of it are uncertain. Some people strongly believe that it has more advantages than the disadvantages. To start with,
language
 skills are built over years and require a lot of practice. If a child is in elementary
school
, he can learn a new
language
, and as he grows, he will master it better. Young
children
 are good at
languages
. As you get older, your ability to learn a new
language
 decreases.
In addition
,on the negative side, some pupils at primary
school
 may get confused by learning both native
language
 and foreign
language
. They may not
sure
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 whether some words are used properly in
native
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their native
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language
 or second
language
 and they may mix both two
languages
 in their formal speaking and writing, which may result in criticism from other people.
Consequently
, they often cannot learn both
languages
 well.
On the other hand
, there are some downsides too. The main disadvantage of learning a second
language
 at primary
school
 is that it is an additional burden for the student.
This
 is particularly true if reading and writing are
also
 taught. Young
children
 should have plenty of time to play and if they are taught too many subjects at
school
, it can be stressful for them.
To conclude
, each child perceives in a special way and gets used to himself in mastering two
languages
.
Furthermore
,
multilingual
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 is an important advantage that benefits career growth and young
children
 are adept at learning new
languages
.
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