The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.

These pie charts illustrate the differences

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workers in a certain

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country

between 1958

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2008.

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the ratio of working and relaxing at home had a significant increase,

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, the percentage of sleeping and going out with friends/family dropped in 2008. In the first year, 33% of the people spent their time

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working, more workers focused on their job after 5 years, the number increased to 42%.

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people in 2008, it was 13%.

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year, it had a 5% growth.

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, the percentage of sleeping dropped from 32% to 25%, which means

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people prefer to have a rest in their spare time. Going out with friends/family

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had the same trend, the number was 19% in 1958,

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, it became 6% in 2008, which is less than one-third of the former year.