The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart depicts information about amounts of individuals taking part in sports in 4 different aspects,

such

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as basketball, tennis, badminton and soccer from 1985 to 2005.

Overall

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, it is clear, that soccer experienced the highest declining tendency of all of them,

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the court predicted a slight increase.

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with, badminton hovered between 48 and 51 in the given years and has not faced a significant fluctuation. In 1990 the number of people dropped to its lowest point similar to basketball. Basketball had a related trend like badminton,

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it not experiencing a considerable disparity.

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, its highest ratio in total was in 1995, when the proportion of humans was approximately 97.

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, the court experienced a constant noticeable rise, since it began with 150 people in 1980 and ended up with more than 220 in 2005.

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, rugby had a massive declining trend because in 1980 the total of athletes was around 245 and

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this

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stage, in 2005 it had only 50 players.

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, in 1995 rugby and tennis were stable in equal since the numbers were exactly 200.

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