The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the key features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates a step-by-step overview of the process of recycling used
aluminium
Use synonyms
cans
. From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, the process, which is a systematic sequence, consists of 3 main stages, beginning with the initial collection and delivery of Linking Words
cans
, Use synonyms
then
processing and finishing with new Linking Words
cans
stored in drinks machines.
The first stage commences with Use synonyms
aluminium
and steel Use synonyms
cans
being loaded into a designated recycling bin before they are segregated and sorted into two boxes. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
aluminium
Use synonyms
cans
are delivered by trucks to recycling centers where they are compressed tightly to form a metal block.
Once in the recycling plant, the compacted block is heated and melted into liquid Use synonyms
aluminium
. Use synonyms
This
fluid is Linking Words
then
reconstituted into new Linking Words
aluminium
bars which are Use synonyms
then
made into rolls and Linking Words
finally
new Linking Words
cans
. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the Linking Words
cans
are transported to vending machines and ready to be sold to consumers. When an individual places their Use synonyms
cans
from those drink machines into a recycling bin, the process starts again.Use synonyms
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