The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.
The table indicates data related to the number of
people
Use synonyms
consumed
three basic foods in Cambodia, Correct pronoun usage
who consumed
Poland
, Use synonyms
Egypt
and Use synonyms
Mexico
. Units are measured in calories per person per day (cal/Use synonyms
p
/d).
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Overall
, the major consumptions Linking Words
are various depend
on the kind of Wrong verb form
vary depending
the
crop. The most popular basic Correct article usage
apply
needs
in Cambodia is Rice Fix the agreement mistake
need
while
the Linking Words
consumptions
rate of Wheat showed high numbers in Change the noun form
consumption
Egypt
. Use synonyms
According to
the data, Linking Words
people
in Use synonyms
Mexico
are likely Use synonyms
consume
Maize as their main source of body energy.
Add the particle
to consume
People
in Cambodia Use synonyms
are have
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have
tendency
to consume Rice at 1445 cal/Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
p
/d, Use synonyms
this
number is higher than rice consumption in Linking Words
Poland
, Use synonyms
Egypt
, and Use synonyms
Mexico
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Wheat Linking Words
are
eaten by major residents in Change the verb form
is
Egypt
and Use synonyms
Poland
with Egyptians Use synonyms
has
Wrong verb form
having
higher
proportion Correct article usage
a higher
by
135 cal/Change preposition
of
p
/d gap between these countries.
The highest rate of Maize Use synonyms
consumptions
is held by Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
Mexico
at 1083 cal/Use synonyms
p
/d. Use synonyms
In contrast
, no one of Linking Words
Use synonyms
people
in Correct article usage
the people
Poland
eats Maize.Use synonyms
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