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The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.
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The table indicates data related to the number of
people
consumed
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 three basic foods in Cambodia,
Poland
,
Egypt
 and
Mexico
. Units are measured in calories per person per day (cal/
p
/d).
Overall
, the major consumptions
are various depend
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vary depending
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 on the kind of
the
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apply
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crop. The most popular basic
needs
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need
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 in Cambodia is Rice
while
 the
consumptions
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consumption
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 rate of Wheat showed high numbers in
Egypt
.
According to
 the data,
people
 in
Mexico
 are likely
consume
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to consume
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 Maize as their main source of body energy.
People
 in Cambodia
are have
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have
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tendency
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a tendency
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 to consume Rice at 1445 cal/
p
/d,
this
 number is higher than rice consumption in
Poland
,
Egypt
, and
Mexico
.
Moreover
, Wheat
are
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 eaten by major residents in
Egypt
 and
Poland
 with Egyptians
has
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having
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higher
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a higher
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 proportion
by
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of
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 135 cal/
p
/d gap between these countries. The highest rate of Maize
consumptions
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consumption
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 is held by
Mexico
 at 1083 cal/
p
/d.
In contrast
, no one of
people
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the people
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 in
Poland
 eats Maize.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, poland, egypt, mexico, p with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • basic foods
  • wheat
  • maize
  • rice
  • countries
  • comparing
  • analyzing
  • trends
  • factors
  • influencing
  • patterns
  • implications
  • health
  • nutrition
  • solutions
  • food security
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