the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015

the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015
The given bar chart illustrates the distribution of
households
’ yearly income in the US population from 2007 to 2015.
Overall
, it is evident that
number
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the number
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of
households
with earnings between $75,000 and $99,999 was the lowest
while
that with revenue over $100,000 was the highest throughout the period, except in 2011. In 2007, there were almost 30
million
of
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households
that
earn
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more than $100,000 annually, the number dropped in 2011 and rebounded in 2015 to approximately 33
million
. Sharing a similar trend,
households
with revenue from $75,000 to $99,999
was
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were
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around half of the
highest earner
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category, the figure fluctuated and peaked at just 15
million
in 2015.
On the other hand
, the number of
households
receiving less than $25,000 and $25,000 -$49,999 was about 25 and 27
million
households
, respectively, which rose to 28 and 29
million
households
over a period of 4 years.
However
, unable to maintain the trends, both figures slightly dipped by 1-2
million
in 2015. Despite the trends experienced by other categories,
households
with incomes of $50,000-$74,999 remained relatively stable at a bit over 20
million
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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