The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart indicates the transformation of travel in terms of two countries -
Australia
and Germany
- from 1960 to 2010.
Overall
, travellers from Europe took up the largest segment in Australia
in 1960. Similarly
, in Germany
, guests from Europe also
accounted for the largest section in 1960. Notably, over a 50-year period, there was a remarkable shift in Australia
; tourists from Asia accounted for 63% of the whole tourism structure. In contrast
, in Germany
, sightseers from Europe still took up the largest segment in 2010. At the same time, visitors from Britain became the smallest piece of travel, accounting for 6%.
Over the 50-year period, Australia
experienced a significant modification. Asian tourists increased by 53%. By contrast
, European visitors dropped by 43%. Meanwhile, the figures for tourists from the USA decreased from 12% to 1%, becoming the smallest segment in Australian tourism. Conversely
, touristry in Germany
did not change dramatically; European guests still represented the largest sector of Germany
's travel, albeit with a decline of 5% between 1960 and 2010. However
, the number of visitors from Britain dipped to 6%, becoming the smallest component of Germany
's tourism between 1960 to 2010.Submitted by Nini
on
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