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The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart indicates the transformation of travel in terms of two countries -
Australia
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 and
Germany
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 - from 1960 to 2010.
Overall
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, travellers from Europe took up the largest segment in
Australia
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 in 1960.
Similarly
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, in
Germany
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, guests from Europe
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 accounted for the largest section in 1960. Notably, over a 50-year period, there was a remarkable shift in
Australia
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; tourists from Asia accounted for 63% of the whole tourism structure.
In contrast
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, in
Germany
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, sightseers from Europe still took up the largest segment in 2010. At the same time, visitors from Britain became the smallest piece of travel, accounting for 6%. Over the 50-year period,
Australia
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 experienced a significant modification. Asian tourists increased by 53%.
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, European visitors dropped by 43%. Meanwhile, the figures for tourists from the USA decreased from 12% to 1%, becoming the smallest segment in Australian tourism.
Conversely
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, touristry in
Germany
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 did not change dramatically; European guests still represented the largest sector of
Germany
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's travel, albeit with a decline of 5% between 1960 and 2010.
However
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, the number of visitors from Britain dipped to 6%, becoming the smallest component of
Germany
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's tourism between 1960 to 2010.
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