Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

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sucessful
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measuring technique for the pupil's
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rather than continual assessment methods like coursework and
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students'
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knowledge
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. Formal
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questions from the entire
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syllabus
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traditional
exam
format to assess candidate subject knowledge rather than any other models.
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calculated
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of the students in the entire subject.
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assignments
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or coursework may only provide
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the fastest and
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way
to
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access
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can be
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to any other model of assessment.
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course work
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should take several weeks to complete and grading will
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time consuming
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process for the tutors.
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will take only
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hours for a
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exams
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of
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, and the students will be assessed immediately after the
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for improvement. In conclusion,
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traditional
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effective and successful
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and
convenient
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performance
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