The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one universtiy did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart demonstrates
one
university’s graduating students from Correct pronoun usage
what one
Anthropology
department did after their graduation. Correct article usage
the Anthropology
Also
, the table chart exhibits employed people’s income in five years. All the data is in Linking Words
proportions
.
Fix the agreement mistake
proportion
Overall
, Linking Words
the
most of the graduated students had Correct article usage
apply
full time
Add a hyphen
full-time
job
. In terms of salaries, Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
majority
of freelance consultants and government sector employees gained at least $75,000 same as roughly half of the private company employees did.
In detail, 52% of the fresh graduated anthropologists has Correct article usage
the majority
full time
job Add a hyphen
full-time
following
by part-time workers with 15% and unemployed graduates with 12%. Wrong verb form
followed
Furthermore
, those who did postgraduate study Linking Words
while
working part-time and full-time study postgraduate made the minority with 5% and 8%, respectively.
Moving on to their salaries, freelance consultants’ 80% Linking Words
employees
gained more than 75,000 with the 40% of in it has the highest salary range which is more than $100,000. Workers of Change preposition
of employees
government
sector’ 80% gained more than 75,000 Correct article usage
the government
while
50% Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
in
Correct word choice
apply
it
gained more than $100,000. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Finally
, private company workers made a minimum of 75,000 and 0% inside it gained more than $100,000.Linking Words
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