You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr.
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Sharma
sharma
,
I hope Change the capitalization
Sharma
this
letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. My name Add a missing verb
is reet
reet kaur
, your neighbor. I am writing Correct your spelling
Reet Kaur
this
letter to inform you about party
that I am going to celebrate my first marriage anniversary which Add an article
a party
the party
would
be Wrong verb form
will
too
noisy.
Next Saturday, I have planned Rephrase
very
surprise
Correct article usage
a surprise
party
for my husband in a new house. To make it memorable, I have invited my close friends and few
relatives. Correct article usage
a few
Additionally
, i
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I
decide
to decorate Wrong verb form
decided
whole
house with fresh flowers which Change the article
the whole
is
done by Change the verb form
are
Add an article
the well
a well
well known
Add a hyphen
well-known
artist
of our city, khandecrorators. Fix the agreement mistake
artists
As well as
, Almost 50 people will attend Rephrase
Also
this
party
at night, we will serve fresh juices and some snacks, Correct word choice
and cake
cake cutting
ceremony Correct your spelling
the cake-cutting
would
be around 7 pm. After having Wrong verb form
will
delicious
dinner, all will dance on Correct article usage
a delicious
dance
floor. I apologize for Add an article
the dance
this
noise.
Come to my place with all family
and suggest Correct pronoun usage
my family
me
, if you have Change preposition
to me
better
idea or something that we could do better. Again, Add an article
a better
i
apologize for Change the capitalization
I
disturbance
.
Hoping to see you in Add an article
the disturbance
party
and hope you will enjoy it.
Yours lovingly,
ReetAdd an article
the party
a party
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a single clear idea. Your opening should introduce yourself more formally and provide background information about you. The body paragraphs should logically detail the event and the closing paragraph should have a polite invitation and farewell.
task achievement
The letter should have a balance of informal and formal tones, appropriate for writing to a neighbor whom you have not met, with a focus on politeness and neighborly consideration.