You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Mr.
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Sharma
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sharma
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Sharma
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, I hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. My name
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is reet
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reet kaur
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Reet Kaur
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, your neighbor. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about
party
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a party
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that I am going to celebrate my first marriage anniversary which
would
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be
too
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very
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noisy. Next Saturday, I have planned
surprise
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a surprise
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party
for my husband in a new house. To make it memorable, I have invited my close friends and
few
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a few
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relatives.
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,
i
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I
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decide
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to decorate
whole
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house with fresh flowers which
is
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done by
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the well
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well known
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artist
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of our city, khandecrorators.
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, Almost 50 people will attend
this
party
at night, we will serve fresh juices and some snacks,
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and cake
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cake cutting
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the cake-cutting
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ceremony
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be around 7 pm. After having
delicious
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a delicious
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dinner, all will dance on
dance
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the dance
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floor. I apologize for
this
noise. Come to my place with all
family
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my family
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and suggest
me
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to me
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, if you have
better
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a better
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idea or something that we could do better. Again,
i
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I
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apologize for
disturbance
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the disturbance
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. Hoping to see you in
party
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the party
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and hope you will enjoy it. Yours lovingly, Reet
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a single clear idea. Your opening should introduce yourself more formally and provide background information about you. The body paragraphs should logically detail the event and the closing paragraph should have a polite invitation and farewell.
task achievement
The letter should have a balance of informal and formal tones, appropriate for writing to a neighbor whom you have not met, with a focus on politeness and neighborly consideration.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • housewarming
  • neighbourhood
  • settle in
  • concern
  • apologize
  • disturbance
  • kindly
  • considerate
  • join
  • gathering
  • introduce
  • socialize
  • appreciate
  • understanding
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