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the graph below gives information about the percentge of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below gives information about the percentge of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the line graph illustrates data
of
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 percentage of the people in certain Asian countries living in cities in
period
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a period
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 of 50 years(1970-2020), with
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 about 20 years(2020-2040)
overall
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 we can see that
malaisya
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Malaysia
,
thailand
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Thailand
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,
indonesia
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Indonesia
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hve
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have
 dramatically increase in
amount
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the amount
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 of time. only the
philippines
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Philippines
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 had
flactuated
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fluctuated
 after slightly raised. but in
conclusion
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 all 4 countries
upterned
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upturned
 from their
inicial
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initial
 point

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