The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the proportion of various groups of Australian
males
and
females
who did physical activity regularly in 2010.
Overall
, women were more likely to exercise than men in Australia, though the
percentage
of men between 15 to 24 years old was higher than women. It can be seen that
females
aged from 25 to 64 represented
significantly
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higher
percentage
than
males
in the same range of
age
group. In the
age
group of 15 to 24, men account for 52.8%
while
the
percentage
of women
attend
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physical activity was 47.7%.
Males
did exercise in the following
age
groups represented 42.2% in 24-34, 39.5% in 35-44, 43.1% in 45-54 and 45.1% in 55-64, respectively.
However
, the figure for
males
was slightly lower than that for
females
, which was 46.7%, only lower than
females
at 0.4%.
Females
did much more physical activity between the ages of 25 and 64, and the gap between the two genders is particularly obvious in the
age
group of 35 to 44 - the
percentage
of
females
was 52.5% which was higher than that of
males
around 13%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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