The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how many passengers used the three major airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. Units are measured in
millions
of passengers. Overall
, there was an increasing trend of visitors for
LaGuardia and Newark Change preposition
to
airport
, Fix the agreement mistake
airports
while
the number of travellers using John F. Kennedy airport
fluctuated.
Throughout the time period, LaGuardia Capitalize word
Airport
is
the most busy Wrong verb form
was
airport
except in 1997. It had 35 millions
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million
of
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apply
passenger
at the start, and experienced a steady increase for four years, Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
then
grew dramatically at
the Change preposition
in
last
year, which ended with around double than
the original number. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, Newark airport
Capitalize word
Airport
also
had an overall
increase in travellers over the five years. It first started at around 15 millions
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million
of
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apply
passenger
, Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
then
increased to around 40 millions
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million
of
visitors in 2000, making it the Change preposition
apply
least used
Add a hyphen
least-used
airport
at
the end.
Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, there was a floating trend for the number of passengers using John F. Kennedy airport
. It first had around 25 Capitalize word
Airport
millions
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million
of
travellers in 1995, Change preposition
apply
then
it fluctuated between 30 to 50 million people for the next five years. At
the end, it ended Change the preposition
In
in
around 45 Change preposition
with
millions
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million
of
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, airport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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