The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 6.0
The bar chart illustrates how many
passengers
used the three major airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. Units are measured in millions of Use synonyms
passengers
. Use synonyms
Overall
, there was an increasing trend of visitors at LaGuardia and Newark airports, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of travellers using John F. Kennedy Use synonyms
Airport
fluctuated.
Throughout the time period, LaGuardia was the most busy Use synonyms
airport
except in 1997. It had 35 Use synonyms
million
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passengers
at the start, and experienced a steady increase for four years, Use synonyms
then
grew dramatically in the Linking Words
last
year, which ended with around double the original Linking Words
number
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Newark Linking Words
Airport
Use synonyms
also
had an Linking Words
overall
increase in travellers over the five years. It first started at around 15 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
passengers
, Use synonyms
then
increased to around 40 Linking Words
million
visitors in 2000, making it the least-used Use synonyms
airport
in the end.
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On the other hand
, there was a floating trend for the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
passengers
using John F. Kennedy Use synonyms
Airport
. It first had around 25 Use synonyms
million
travellers in 1995, Use synonyms
then
it fluctuated between 30 to 50 Linking Words
million
people for the next five years. In the end, it ended with around 45 Use synonyms
million
visitors, which is slightly higher than the Use synonyms
number
in Newark, making it the second Use synonyms
most busy
Correct word choice
busiest
airport
in New York City.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers, number, airport, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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