The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 6.0

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major 

airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main 

features, and make comparisons where relevant. 6.0
The bar chart illustrates how many
passengers
used the three major airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. Units are measured in millions of
passengers
.
Overall
, there was an increasing trend of visitors at LaGuardia and Newark airports,
while
the
number
of travellers using John F. Kennedy
Airport
fluctuated. Throughout the time period, LaGuardia was the most busy
airport
except in 1997. It had 35
million
passengers
at the start, and experienced a steady increase for four years,
then
grew dramatically in the
last
year, which ended with around double the original
number
.
In addition
, Newark
Airport
also
had an
overall
increase in travellers over the five years. It first started at around 15
million
passengers
,
then
increased to around 40
million
visitors in 2000, making it the least-used
airport
in the end.
On the other hand
, there was a floating trend for the
number
of
passengers
using John F. Kennedy
Airport
. It first had around 25
million
travellers in 1995,
then
it fluctuated between 30 to 50
million
people for the next five years. In the end, it ended with around 45
million
visitors, which is slightly higher than the
number
in Newark, making it the second
most busy
Correct word choice
busiest
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airport
in New York City.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers, number, airport, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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