The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 6.0
The bar chart illustrates how many
passengers
used the three major airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. Units are measured in millions of passengers
. Overall
, there was an increasing trend of visitors at LaGuardia and Newark airports, while
the number
of travellers using John F. Kennedy Airport
fluctuated.
Throughout the time period, LaGuardia was the most busy airport
except in 1997. It had 35 million
passengers
at the start, and experienced a steady increase for four years, then
grew dramatically in the last
year, which ended with around double the original number
. In addition
, Newark Airport
also
had an overall
increase in travellers over the five years. It first started at around 15 million
passengers
, then
increased to around 40 million
visitors in 2000, making it the least-used airport
in the end.
On the other hand
, there was a floating trend for the number
of passengers
using John F. Kennedy Airport
. It first had around 25 million
travellers in 1995, then
it fluctuated between 30 to 50 million
people for the next five years. In the end, it ended with around 45 million
visitors, which is slightly higher than the number
in Newark, making it the second most busy
Correct word choice
busiest
airport
in New York City.Submitted by jackcityone on
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