The costs of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. Do you believe that the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

Over the

last

two or three decades,

tourism

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industry has been improvised

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around the world.

As a result

, travel expenses are affordable and

this

industry

also

increases. I think

this

phenomenon has more benefits than drawbacks.

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the subsequent paragraphs. There are main imperative benefits

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that

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growing travel industry. One of the main advantages is that

tourism

can play a crucial role in the country's economy that

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the infrastructure. People are able to get all the essential amenities from that. Another merit is that folk's earnings will be improved which means their standard of

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living can grow

by

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the

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tourism

because

tourist

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tourists

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buy and accommodate

in

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local places and products too.

For example

, India gets more benefits from

tourism

,

therefore

, they can invest huge

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of money to develop the nation's

such

as infrastructure development. I agree that

this

phenomenon has more merits. There are some drawbacks. One of the main disadvantages is that natural resources might be diminished

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because a bulk amount of

traveler

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use

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all those in some

place

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places

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where

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that

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already have scarcity

problem

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problems

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like water. Another demerit is that pollution could be increased,

visitor

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visitors

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like to visit all places around the country

while

they use vehicles,

thus

,

pollution

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ratio will increase dramatically.

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, India suffers

pollution

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issue

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tremendously since it has improved their

tourism

field. In conclusion,

tourism

is the inevitable sector in

country's

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a country's

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economy

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contribution.

This

can improve people's

life

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and

economy

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undoubtedly,

therefore

, I believe that

this

trend has more merits that outweigh demerits.