Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that

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the extinction

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of

plants

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and

animal

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animals

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is the major environmental

issue

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of our era.Others think that apart from

plants

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and

animals

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others

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environmental problems are more important.In

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essay,I will discuss both views and give my opinion. First look at

loss

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of

plants

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and animal

species

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is the more concerning environmental

issue

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.The first argument

which

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that

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favour

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view is

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ecosystem

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an ecosystem

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.It is believed that our

ecosystem

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is linked by

plants

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and

animals

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.

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,if our

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is disturbed

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then

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our lives are in danger.

Loss

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of

plants

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and animal

species

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are main

issue

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to our

ecosystem

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.

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,soil erosion is avoided by

plants

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.The second reason which

support

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this

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statement is

is

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food.It is considered that

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loss

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the loss

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of

plants

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and

animals

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means

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a shortage

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of vital

source

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sources

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of food.

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,

plants

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and

animals

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are the main eatables for humans for centuries.

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loss

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of

plants

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and animal

species

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is

major

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a major

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environmental

issue

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of

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time.

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,other environmental situations which are

danger

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to

environment

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the environment

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such

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as carbon emission,noise and smoke are

also

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concerning to

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time.

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,carbon

emission

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emissions

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release

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from factories,traffic and air conditions are causing

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the depletion

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of ozone (

layer

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the layer

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around the earth which protects from harmful rays from

sun

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the sun

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)

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of

ozone

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the ozone

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layer results in many diseases.Noise and smoke have

also

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major

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a major

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impact on

environment

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the environment

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of

today

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life. In conclusion,

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the extinction

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of

plants

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and animal

species

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has collectively more impact

in

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on

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present

environment

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environmental

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isuues

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issues

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