Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that

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the extinction

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of

plants

and

animal

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animals

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is the major environmental

issue

of our era.Others think that apart from

plants

and

animals

others

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other

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environmental problems are more important.In

this

essay,I will discuss both views and give my opinion. First look at

loss

of

plants

and animal

species

is the more concerning environmental

issue

.The first argument

which

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favour

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this

view is

ecosystem

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an ecosystem

the ecosystem

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.It is believed that our

ecosystem

is linked by

plants

and

animals

.

Moreover

,if our

ecosystem

is disturbed

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then

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our lives are in danger.

Loss

of

plants

and animal

species

are main

issue

to our

ecosystem

.

For instance

,soil erosion is avoided by

plants

.The second reason which

support

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this

statement is

is

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food.It is considered that

loss

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the loss

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of

plants

and

animals

means

shortage

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a shortage

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of vital

source

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sources

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of food.

Furthermore

,

plants

and

animals

are the main eatables for humans for centuries.

Hence

loss

of

plants

and animal

species

is

major

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a major

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environmental

issue

of

this

time.

On the other hand

,other environmental situations which are

danger

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to

environment

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the environment

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such

as carbon emission,noise and smoke are

also

concerning to

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the present

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time.

Moreover

,carbon

emission

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emissions

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release

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from factories,traffic and air conditions are causing

depletion

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the depletion

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of ozone (

layer

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the layer

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around the earth which protects from harmful rays from

sun

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the sun

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)

loss

of

ozone

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the ozone

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layer results in many diseases.Noise and smoke have

also

major

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a major

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impact on

environment

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the environment

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of

today

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life. In conclusion,

extinction

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the extinction

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of

plants

and animal

species

has collectively more impact

in

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on

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present

environment

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environmental

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isuues

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issues

.