The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar diagram represents the developing countries and
its
Correct pronoun usage
their
pollution
level
also
the bars in the chart differ and illustrates
the causes Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
for
Change preposition
of
pollution
. (electricity genereation
, Transport, Industry)
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generation
While
China
produce
nearly 60% of Change the verb form
produces
pollution
by transport, no other countries
produces like that. Fix the agreement mistake
country
Australia
produces very less
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little
pollution
. China
produced industrious pollution
nearly two times more than Japan and four times more than Australia
Japan managed to have the least PPM
amount given in the charts less than one-third of China
's 60 PPM
for electricity generation.
Japan's PPM
levels by transport equals to
the Change preposition
apply
PPM
level
of America's electrical and industrial cause. Australia
's PPM
level
is lesser than all other countries
Change noun form
countries'
country's
PPM
level
. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
Whereas
, America's transportation factor is nearly as much as China
's electricity at about 60 PPM
.
To summarize, at the bottom of the data Australia
's whole pollution
is less than a third of China
which is the biggest polluter with pollution
rounding of about 250PPM total.Submitted by insighttribez on
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