The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the layout of a central library
shows
us the changes during the 20-year period. Correct word choice
and shows
Overall
, According to
the given data, it is evident that the number of facilities increased besides
some replacements.
First of all, we can mention the main hall and its changes, name as removing the social tables in the middle of the hallway and adding some self-service machines on the right side of the hall. Moving further
, all adult books
including fiction and non-fiction books
were established on the right side and reference books
were added on the second turn on the left side from the entrance.
Additionally
, moving on to the changes in each room
, the enquiry desk was removed and replaced by a caffe
in the right corner. Correct your spelling
cafe
Moreover
the children’s Add a comma
Moreover,
books
room
was replaced with a cd and the computer room
and previous
place of it became a lecture Correct article usage
the previous
room
, however
the computer Add the comma(s)
however,
room
did not get removed from the map it only moved a little below, first turn on the left from the entrance. There is also
a change in the size of the second area on the left which now become a place for storytelling and children's books
.
To sum up
, the difference between Correct article usage
the to
to
maps is in details with updating facilities.Correct your spelling
two
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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