The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates the layout of a central library

shows

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and shows

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us the changes during the 20-year period.

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According to

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the given data, it is evident that the number of facilities increased

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some replacements. First of all, we can mention the main hall and its changes, name as removing the social tables in the middle of the hallway and adding some self-service machines on the right side of the hall. Moving

further

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, all adult

books

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including fiction and non-fiction

books

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were established on the right side and reference

books

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were added on the second turn on the left side from the entrance.

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, moving on to the changes in each

room

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, the enquiry desk was removed and replaced by a

caffe

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cafe

in the right corner.

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Moreover

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the children’s

books

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room

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was replaced with a cd and the computer

room

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and

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the previous

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place of it became a lecture

room

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however

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the computer

room

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did not get removed from the map it only moved a little below, first turn on the left from the entrance. There is

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a change in the size of the second area on the left which now become a place for storytelling and children's

books

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To sum up

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, the difference between

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the to

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two

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maps is in details with updating facilities.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, room with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

213 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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