The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the average household
energy
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consumed by Australians and the
gas
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emissions generated by the usage of electronic furniture. From the data provided, we can conclude that almost every appliance has produced more carbons than the
energy
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they have consumed, even doubling the electricity consumption. Only the heating device seems to have more efficiency.
Heating
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The heating
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appliance was the highest percentage of Australian household electricity consumption, totalling 42% of the total usage.
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, the mentioned device contributed to only 15% of the total emission.
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, refrigeration only used 7% of the average
energy
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and saw itself doubling the
gas
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produced, almost comparable to the heating device. The same condition happened with the lightning and other equipment which only consumed 4% and 15%, respectively, to double their household
gas
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waste. The highest amount of emission was generated by water heating with almost one-third of the total, even though only came second in terms of
energy
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spent behind the heaters. Cooling equipment
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as air conditioners
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only cost 2% of the
overall
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usage and still became the lowest
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produced.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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