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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The graph illustrates the
quantity
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 of families depending on their revenue in a year in 2007, 2011 and 2015. There are two main trends in the bar chart.
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the quantity of
the
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apply
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US households
remain
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remains
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 steady and there
is
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are
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 no significant changes
occuring
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occurring
 among types of income amount in
presented
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the presented
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 years.
Secondly
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, the smallest number of households remains consistent,
otherwise
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 the biggest
is
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has
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 changed a little. Throughout the specified years, all revenue groups demonstrate
consistent
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a consistent
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 trend.
Proportion
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The proportion
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 between salary groups was
the
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apply
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stable in all years.
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, the lowest point is a group of $100,000 or more.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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