The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the changes
guests
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to types of different places in a European nation from 1987 and 2007.It was measured in thousands.
Overall
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, those who thought to visit the bank and the lagoon, as shown in the line diagram, were the most popular. Every year it went up and down. In 1987, the most visited place was the seaboard, where 40% of people were on the left. The figure of people going to the coast reached 35
thousand
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only in 2007.The sum of people visiting lakes and mountains increased at one rate.Even there were about 35
thousand
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shoreline viewers, 5
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less than in 1987. the number still steadily went up to over 70
thousand
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in the end.One decade remains unchanged until 2002 and
then
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returns to growth again. The figure for lake visitors,
on the other hand
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, rose smoothly and reached its peak of 75
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in 2002.
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, their number immediately dropped to 50
thousand
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in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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