The table shows the obesity rate in one country over a period of time

The table shows the obesity rate in one country over a period of time
The line graph gives information on the obesity
rate
in one country by
age
from 18 to 74
years
old over 24
years
.
Overall
, there was an upward trend of obesity
rate
for every
age
over the timeframe. Units are measured in
percent
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. The
age
groups of 45-64 and 65-74 experienced a similar pattern through the
years
. Starting at the same point about 17,5% in 1971, these figures experienced a rapid growth
rate
to above 35% in 1999. From that period the obesity
rate
for these two groups remained constant at approximately 35%.
Then
between 2003 and 2005, the 45-64
age
group
rose to around 41%, with the 65-74
age
group
indicating no significant difference to the latter. Interestingly, the
age
group
18-29 and 30-44 were the categories with the lowest
rate
of overweight for the following
years
. Starting just under 9% and 15% respectively, these figures fluctuated and increased significantly to around 21% and 30% in 1999. From
this
point, the 18-29
age
group
remained stable contribution at 24% by 2005,
while
the 30-44 got a moderate increase to 35% in 2003 and
then
steady at that point until 2005.
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