Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is observed that many

prisoners

, who commit serious crimes, have the trend to commit crimes again after finishing their punishment, and

that is

just against the purpose why jails are established. Being hard to fit in

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society

after getting out of

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jail

is the main reason to lead second or more crimes are committed. To cope with that, measurements by

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are necessary to be done. There are two reasons why offenders feel like

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in real life.

First,

they

feel

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extremely difficult to find jobs. After several years of isolation from

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society

, those

prisoners

would

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lack

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the ability to

work

like other people; even some part-time jobs can be the hardest thing they could do,

not to mention

other full-time jobs.

Second,

the prejudices

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are not easy to erase. People can always worry about the potential dangers

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those

prisoners

, even though they may already revised themselves and

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to be kind.

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worries are exhibited in the form of

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, judgements and even bullying, which add huge pressure for the

prisoners

. Once they find it hard to live like normal citizens, they can do nothing but risk offending laws again just in order to make a living. To prevent

such

tragedies, happen, the measurements should be taken especially to eliminate the gap between

prisoners

and

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society

.

First,

there can be some training or learning

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opportunities

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opportunity

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opportunities

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in

jail

,

such

as cooking, crafting, basic engineering…etc. By implementing these basic skills, the

prisoners

can not only learn practical abilities for

work

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but

also

help to build their confidence to go back to real life. For those who are well-behaved and hard-working, the prison can even provide the chance to study in

jail

, providing them

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more advanced knowledge that can be well

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in

work

.

Also

, mental consultation is necessary to be taken. A long period of isolation can decrease their ability not only

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work

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but

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with others.

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professional guide,

prisoners

can build up

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strong mind to face every challenge and quest that may happen in the future. A

jail

is built to adjust people who commit

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; it is

also

important,

however

, to consider how to manage them to fit the

society

without

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. By providing

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experience and increasing mental

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in the

jail

, these

prisoners

have higher chances and

courages

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courageous

courage

to successfully start their second life.