Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: · Your reason for writing · What you like about the restaurant · Suggestions for improvement
Dear Manager, Hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter regarding my recent visit to restaurant
with my friends. Add an article
the restaurant
a restaurant
Firstly
, I would like to tell you that my friends really enjoyed the food, Specially
the seafood one as Rephrase
Especially
Correct article usage
a starters
starters
, Fix the agreement mistake
starter
Moreover
, They were very much
surprised to see a long list of options for Fix the agreement mistake
apply
main
course. Add an article
the main
a main
Furthermore
, they had ordered all the different varieties of cuisines that matched perfectly to the taste.As I am being a regular customer. I often visit restaurant
every alternative week. so I am very Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
much know
with the taste here. But what I was impressed about that evening was the customer service, which was the icing on the cake. Even though it was a weekend, peak hours and Correct word choice
familiar
restaurant
was Add an article
the restaurant
jam packed
, not a even single waiter lost his cool. and served the populace with Add a hyphen
jam-packed
perfect
smile and generosity.Correct article usage
a perfect
Furthermore
, I would like to add a piece of suggestion regarding the parking facility. I know you people are putting a lot of effort on
customer comfort. But I would recommend to allocate Change preposition
into
some one
at the parking space who can help guide customers to park their vehicles correctly during peak hours.Hope to hear from you Correct your spelling
someone
soonYours
sincerelyRajeshCorrect your spelling
soon yours
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coherence cohesion
Make sure you structure your letter with clear paragraphs - one for the purpose of writing, one for your positive feedback, and one for your suggestions. This will enhance the organization and readability of your content.
coherence cohesion
Begin your letter with a proper greeting and end with an appropriate closing. While you have used 'Dear Manager' and 'Yours sincerely,' which are suitable, ensure that all salutations and closings are correctly formatted with appropriate punctuation.
task achievement
While your reason for writing and suggestions for improvement are clear, expand a bit more on your reasons for liking the restaurant to fully satisfy the task's requirements.
task achievement
Maintain a tone that is consistently polite and appreciative. Your letter does well in this regard, but watch for informal language such as 'jam packed' which may not be suitable for the semi-formal tone of a letter to a restaurant manager.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,