The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade -labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The lower tables provide figures
of
Fairtrade Change preposition
for
sales
of bananas
and coffee for 5 countries
in Europe in 1999 and 2004.
In general, we can see from the data that the UK
and Switzerland
had advanced sales
for both products by 2004, in comparison with the other 3 countries
.
For instance
, in 1999, the sales
of coffee were relatively equal for all countries
. In particular
, for the UK
and Denmark
the figures were 1.5 and 1.8 Add a comma
Denmark,
millions
respectively, Change to singular
million
whereas
, for Belgium and Sweden the marks did not reach to
even 2 Change preposition
apply
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
euros. Meanwhile, in 2004 the pattern appears to be slightly different. Namely, there was a significant rise in the Change preposition
apply
sales
of coffee for
the Change preposition
in
UK
and Switzerland
. The sales
amount increased more than ten times for the UK
,
and doubled for Remove the comma
apply
Switzerland
.
In 1999, Switzerland
had the highest sales
volume for bananas
(15 mln euros), by contrast
with other
four Correct article usage
the other
countries
, that
did not pass over 2 Correct pronoun usage
which
millions
. In 2004, Change to singular
million
Switzerland
remained the biggest consumer of bananas
(47 mln euros), with all four other countries
spending much less on them. However
, there were
a noticeable jump in the consumption of Change the verb form
was
bananas
for
the Change preposition
in
UK
and Belgium, while
the figures for Sweden and Denmark decreased slightly.Submitted by dnm.best on
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