Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discussion both sides and give your opinion

There is no doubt environmental issues are detrimental to the earth.

While

some people believe that it should be solved globally, others argue that it is better to deal

within

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each country. In

this

essay, I will explain my support for the latter view. On the one hand, the

supporter

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to

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a global solutions

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global solutions

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for environmental issues are arguing that major

industries

which are harmful to the environment are multinational corporations.

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Therefore

, the

national level

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solution will not be sufficient to control these polluting

industries

.

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industries

are

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operating in under-developed Asian

countries

are denied permission to run in European

countries

.

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result

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it producing

wast

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waste

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products which are detrimental to

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apply

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nature

will

effect

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globelly

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globally

.

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,

solution

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for

nature

saving should be managed micro level,

therefore

, each country should take responsibility

to reduce

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or

eliminate

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the

process

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processes

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which are dangerous for the environment.

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Netherland

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intiated

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initiated

to control

motor

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vehicles are

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bicycle usage which was a great

success

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initiative to control pollution which

harmful

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for

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the

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health and

nature

.

Moreover

, the the environmental saving plans should be tailored for each country by considering

thier

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their

economical

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, social and climate conditions.

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promotion

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of

uage

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usage

use

of

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the bicycle

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in the

middle

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east

countries

are not possible in

summar

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summer

months,

therfore

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therefore

, the usage of public transport should be promoted

those

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countries

. In conclusion,

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multinational polluting

industries

should be controlled globally,

national level

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micro solutions are vital to prevent environmentally harmful practices. The solution to

save

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nature

should be tailored and

implimented

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implemented

nationally will be

wise

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choice.