Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discussion both sides and give your opinion
There is no doubt environmental issues are detrimental to the earth.
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this
essay, I will explain my support for the latter view.
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supporters
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for environmental issues are arguing that major Correct the article-noun agreement
global solutions
a global solution
industries
which are harmful to the environment are multinational corporations. Use synonyms
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Therefore
national level
solution will not be sufficient to control these polluting Add a hyphen
national-level
industries
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result,
wast
products which are detrimental to Correct your spelling
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nature
will Use synonyms
effect
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affect
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.
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globally
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solution
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solutions
nature
saving should be managed micro level, Use synonyms
therefore
, each country should take responsibility Linking Words
to reduce
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for reducing
eliminate
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eliminating
process
which are dangerous for the environment. Fix the agreement mistake
processes
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promoting
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to
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health and Correct article usage
apply
nature
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Moreover
, the the environmental saving plans should be tailored for each country by considering Linking Words
thier
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their
economical
, social and climate conditions. Replace the word
economic
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the promotion
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the bicycle
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countries
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summar
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summer
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, the usage of public transport should be promoted Correct your spelling
therefore
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in those
countries
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
Although
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industries
should be controlled globally, Use synonyms
national level
micro solutions are vital to prevent environmentally harmful practices. The solution to Add a hyphen
national-level
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saving
nature
should be tailored and Use synonyms
implimented
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