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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discussion both sides and give your opinion

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it is very common to see environmental problems everywhere around the world.It had been an ongoing debate in regard to
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 responsibility of the problem , whether it can be solved worldwide or individually every nation has to tackle it.So, in the upcoming paragraphs,
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 would like to discuss both sides and reach a conclusion with my opinion. On the former side, if any obstacle regarding the environment is solved with global cooperation
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 going to bring some optimistic solutions by sharing the resources, technology and any other kind of abundant information which is required to overcome the problem.
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greenhouse
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 are creating a lot of trouble not only for human beings but
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 for animals and others. on the other side, the masses say that it is the onus of a nation because each country has their own circumstances ,
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 which they have to deal. Most of the time ,some countries are not fully prepared to deal with other countries on a broad level, in that way, they always try to keep everything in their restricted areas. In my opinion, it is not only the duty of
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 world but
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can be solved. To recapitulate, it can be said that the importance of both can not be overlooked because both can play their role together to deal with everything.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unified response
  • consensus
  • autonomy
  • sovereignty
  • frameworks
  • sustainability
  • multilateral agreements
  • cross-border issues
  • ecosystems
  • carbon footprint
  • renewable energy
  • biodiversity
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • environmental policy
  • sustainable development
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