essay on tige and how is the king of the jungle now days how is it used

Tiger
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Tigers
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are burning bright it is shinning in the
shadow
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shadows
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and sun but now days tiger
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getting
gettting
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getting
thinner one By one or two by
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two the
two
twothe
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two
people who kill tigers are soulless.
tigers
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are
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used for
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used for
skin care ,
decarotion
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decoration
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wall
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walls
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and they are
bonesfor
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bones for
some
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chinese
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medicine
.once
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jungles trembled at the roars of the Tigers the birds
dissapeared
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disappeared
the monkeys screamed (
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)but now the geckos are nibbling on his Ear oh lord
stampled
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stamped
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upon his skin in equal strips,black and gold shimmer now boar hunter , forest king but now he is gone
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coherence cohesion
Your essay lacks clarity in its structure, and it isn't easy to follow a logical progression of ideas about the significance and current state of tigers. To improve, make sure to have a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion that reinforce your main points.
task achievement
While your essay touches on the topic of tigers and their decline due to poaching, it fails to address how they are 'the king of the jungle' or provide well-supported arguments and examples. For a better score, ensure that each paragraph conveys a single idea with relevant examples and analyses that contribute to the overall argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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