essay on the tiger and how is it used for and how now days people used it

Tigers
are burning bright it is
shinning
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shining
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in the shadows and sun but
now
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nowadays
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days tiger getting thinner one By one or two by two people who kill
tigers
are soulless.
Tigers
are used for skin care ,
decoration
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and decoration
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On the walls and they are bones for some Chinese medicine Once jungles trembled at the roars of the
Tigers
the birds disappeared the monkeys screamed (uproar)but now the geckos are nibbling on his Ear oh lord stamped upon his skin in equal strips,black and gold shimmer now boar hunter , forest king but now he is gone
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Use specific examples and evidence to support points made in the essay. This strengthens your argument and demonstrates a clear understanding of the topic.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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