A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him/her about other times to visit Write atleast 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear________.

Dear John, How are you , buddy ? It's been an eternity since I
last
spoke with you ,Hope you are doing well.
Firstly
, I want to thank you for inviting me to your place for Christmas Celebrations.I
extremely
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miss the delicious cakes made by your mother on the next day of the festival.It's been a long time
I
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since I
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have been to your place. Unfortunately, I cannot attend your event
this
year since my parents want me to be at home . As you are aware my grandmother has been ill for a very long time,and she wishes to celebrate
this
festival with family members ,so my uncles who are living in
States
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the States
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are making up for
this
event. After
Christmas
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Christmas,
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I am planning to move to Europe for my higher education . I am free in the month of January as schools in Europe generally start in February.Let me know if
this
works for you so that we can spend some time before I leave. Hoping to hear from you soon Yours lovingly, Vikram.
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greeting and closing
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complete response
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