You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned hime, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Manager,
I am writing
this
in regard to the documents
that I unfortunately left in your hotel.
On 26th December, I came to Hyderabad to attend the
business meeting and planned to stay in your hotel .Since, I am carrying important Correct article usage
a
documents
I enquired if the management can provide me a
safe locker,based on my conditions they allocated my 409 as it has Add the preposition
with a
additional
security box.
On the next day,I left the hotel a little early to board the earliest train to Delhi.After reaching the office I noticed that the Correct article usage
an additional
documents
were missing and then
realised that they are
still in the same safe box.The Wrong verb form
were
documents
are extremely important for me because it has security details related to my upcoming project.
Can you please find the documents
in the respective room and courier them to the designated address '325 Adhan building,Delhi' .
Will be waiting for your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Vikram Kallem.Change the punctuation
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that the main ideas are not blurred together. Paragraphs should be well-developed and focused.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words to better connect sentences and paragraphs, and to guide the reader through your arguments and statements.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task given, providing necessary details and explanations where appropriate to fulfill the task requirements completely.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. Avoid any informal language when writing in a formal context, and ensure that the courtesy and formality are appropriate for the situation.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite