You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned hime, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Manager, I am writing
this
in regard to the
documents
that I unfortunately left in your hotel. On 26th December, I came to Hyderabad to attend
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
business meeting and planned to stay in your hotel .Since, I am carrying important
documents
I enquired if the management can provide me
a
Add the preposition
with a
show examples
safe locker,based on my conditions they allocated my 409 as it has
additional
Correct article usage
an additional
show examples
security box. On the next day,I left the hotel a little early to board the earliest train to Delhi.After reaching the office I noticed that the
documents
were missing and
then
realised that they
are
Wrong verb form
were
show examples
still in the same safe box.The
documents
are extremely important for me because it has security details related to my upcoming project. Can you please find the
documents
in the respective room and courier them to the designated address '325 Adhan building,Delhi'
.
Change the punctuation
?
show examples
Will be waiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely, Vikram Kallem.
Submitted by vicky.kallem on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that the main ideas are not blurred together. Paragraphs should be well-developed and focused.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words to better connect sentences and paragraphs, and to guide the reader through your arguments and statements.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task given, providing necessary details and explanations where appropriate to fulfill the task requirements completely.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. Avoid any informal language when writing in a formal context, and ensure that the courtesy and formality are appropriate for the situation.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: