The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for the future. Earnings are in US dollars ($). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart displays the average salary in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years with an estimated value for 2018. The unit of currency is in United States dollars.

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, it can be clearly seen that wages consistently increased in every recorded time period, except

2008

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, when they decreased slightly. Salaries are expected to increase significantly in the future. Average earnings in 1968 stood at their lowest recorded levels at just under $8,000 and they

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increased a decade later to around $10,000 in 1978.

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trend continued in 1988 with the average income climbing to

approximately$13,000

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approximately $ 13,000

. 10 years later, in 1998, it

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improved to its highest recorded value of about $15,000. The only notable exception to

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expansion in levels of pay was 2008 when wages decreased by around $1,000 from the peak of 1998.

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trend is not expected to continue in the future with projections of over $20,000 forecast for 2018.

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fluctuations
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significant peak
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The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for the future. Earnings are in US dollars ($). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Home schooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence

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children who are brought up in families that do not have large amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brough up by wealthy parents. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?