The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart and table show information about resorts resided by tourists on a specific holiday in Australia and
also
illustrate the preferences of visitors such
as average length of stay, most popular accommodation, and main activity. There are many tourists by region of origin such
as Asia, Europe, America, and others. As can be seen from the chart, it is clear that
Asia is the most popular to visit in Australia.
In detail, the number of tourists from other regions is approximately four times smaller as Asian, compared to 10 per cent
and 35 per cent
, but there is more average length of stay of 10 days while
Asia just resides in 7 days. If we look at European travellers are twice as popular as Americans, compared to 35 per cent
and 18 per cent
.
The same preference to select accommodation is European and other nations which tend to be camping or caravan. Likewise
, sightseeing is the main activity of Asian and American visitors.Submitted by champperkhu on
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