The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The line graph illustrates data about fast food which was consumed by the UK population over 20 years periods, between 1970 and 1990. Units are measured in 10-year period,
grams
per week.
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Overall
, the spending amount for fish and Linking Words
chips
and hamburgers increased dramatically Use synonyms
while
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consumption
of pizza stayed in the same Use synonyms
range
of 300 and 200 Use synonyms
grams
, respectively over the given time zone. In 1990, fish and Use synonyms
chips
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consumption
peaked at 500 Use synonyms
grams
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while
the other 2 consumer goods stayed in the same Linking Words
range
.
On the one hand, Both hamburgers and fish& Use synonyms
chips
start in the same Use synonyms
range
and go up slightly in 1980. DuringUse synonyms
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a
such
as in 1980 and 1990, the Fish& and Linking Words
chips
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consumption
figure rose dramatically to about 350 Use synonyms
grams
per week, rather than the spending by UK people on hamburgers. In 1990, fish&Use synonyms
chips
consumed 2 times more than hamburger by UK people in 1990.
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On the other hand
, pizza spending fluctuated in the Linking Words
range
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such
as 300 and 200 Linking Words
grams
per week over a given 20-year period. Following Use synonyms
this
, the Linking Words
Consumption
amount for pizza accounted for a slight decrease from 1970 to 1980 and afterwards stayed in the same amount of line over another 10-year period.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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