The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The line graph illustrates data about fast food which was consumed by the UK population over 20 years periods, between 1970 and 1990. Units are measured in
grams
per week.
Overall
, the spending amount for fish and
chips
and hamburgers increased dramatically
while
the
consumption
of pizza stayed in the same
range
of 300 and 200
grams
, respectively over the given time zone. In 1990, fish and
chips
consumption
peaked at 500
grams
while
the other 2 consumer goods stayed in the same
range
. On the one hand, Both hamburgers and fish&
chips
start in the same
range
and go up slightly in 1980. During
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10-year period,
such
as in 1980 and 1990, the Fish& and
chips
consumption
figure rose dramatically to about 350
grams
per week, rather than the spending by UK people on hamburgers. In 1990, fish&
chips
consumed 2 times more than hamburger by UK people in 1990.
On the other hand
, pizza spending fluctuated in the
range
such
as 300 and 200
grams
per week over a given 20-year period. Following
this
, the
Consumption
amount for pizza accounted for a slight decrease from 1970 to 1980 and afterwards stayed in the same amount of line over another 10-year period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, chips, consumption, range with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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